Sunday, 5 October 2008

Mantle inspired writing

I was scared standing amongst the dark leaves on the forest floor, twigs snapping as I took steps through the dark steamy smokey mist. Perplexed, I looked with horror at the the big, black and grey trees standing all around me. No - one knows me. No - one sees me. No - one knows where I'm going.

As I walk through the spooky night, all I can hear is the sounds of the night. Owls hooting, trees swaying as the cold breeze cuts through me. Crash. Panic. An old creaky tree falls on the green mossy leaves.

4 comments:

Grimley & Holt said...

You have got to finish this Hannah. It is full of suspense and so scary. Superb. I will tell Mr K to check it out too. Well done.

Grimley & Holt said...

iybafiounf;o

Grimley & Holt said...

very good im proud of you xxxxx

love from dad xxxxx

Grimley & Holt said...

well done hannah p