Friday, 17 October 2008

spice and bubba situation

I wish to persuade you that spike shouldn't of left bubba because something bad could of happened to bubba because.
It is like bubba has has ran away and a new bbba has come back
never acts like him self anymore it is very strange.

How would you feel if any think did happen to bubba.
Bubba has never done anything to hurt spike so bubba doesn't deserve any of this
grieve that spike has ben giving him.


some people think that bubba got trapped and lived in the water tower
people think that bubba hid in the water tower when he ran away.

Sunday, 5 October 2008

Mantle inspired writing

I was scared standing amongst the dark leaves on the forest floor, twigs snapping as I took steps through the dark steamy smokey mist. Perplexed, I looked with horror at the the big, black and grey trees standing all around me. No - one knows me. No - one sees me. No - one knows where I'm going.

As I walk through the spooky night, all I can hear is the sounds of the night. Owls hooting, trees swaying as the cold breeze cuts through me. Crash. Panic. An old creaky tree falls on the green mossy leaves.

Friday, 12 September 2008

begin to support conclusions using reasoned arguments and evidence. children are to back up there statements in their arguments with evidence


we've used evidence to find the suspect that robbed grimley and holt primary
school.

Wednesday, 10 September 2008

total vision detectives

I am called Rachelle

My mantle is called total vision detectives.
We are trying to catch this man that has
stole some expensive trophies from grimley
and Holt primary school. They said he
was carrying a big black bag that looked
Quiet heavy.They said that they don't
recognise him from anywhere or tho the
cleaner did say that someone did phone
to see her but she didn't know who it was.
these are the witnesses a 5 year old
girl and the window cleaner the art teacher
and the caretaker they all said that
they sore him.